I can feel the intensity of certain emotions quite well in the poem.It's obvious the spirit wants to merge in the universal consciousness and that's not a bad phenomenon.If that happens then be sure the possibilities of ignited samskaras inherent in the line" क्रान्ति के आसार-बीज" is no longer a distant dream.Happy there are still some souls left interested in shattering the bondages caused by the body (देह)!!!A good attempt by the poet in exploring the feelings held within and spread outside in form of thoughts and experiences :-))
गज़ब की कविता ! आभार ।
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